| The Poppy display |
In the Daily Mirror this
week, a sensitive issue arose in the form of Remembrance Day. Bosses at ASDA in Harpurhey, Manchester removed
a poppy display that depicted a dead soldier following many complaints. The
display included a stuffed figure that was lying on the floor, yet many
shoppers took to twitter to complain about just how insensitive this was. ASDA
were trying to create a commemorative display yet upset so many people by doing
so. But why was this?
The boss at ASDA
said the display was a mark of respect. She said “It was never our intention to
cause offence with the poppy display but it was to show respect and our pride
in supporting the Poppy Appeal”. ASDA create displays every year but this has
been the first to upset shoppers.
| The display after the 'fallen soldier' was removed |
I think this story is really interesting because Remembrance Day is a time to be respectful, but how far do you go to be respectful? I don’t think ASDA’S intentions were to cause offence, but I do see how they were trying to commemorate the day. However i do agree with what Brad Wray said whereby it could trigger distress and upset in customers because it can remind them of dark and upsetting times.
Read the article here: http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/uk-news/asda-bosses-remove-bad-taste-6787766
I like how you have both raised and answered questions in your analysis and the source of the story is also helpful to me as a reader to help with contextual detail. The inclusion of the image is also helpful as a reader to understand why the display caused such controversy.
ReplyDeleteTo make this even better perhaps include an image of another Remembrance Day display to show contrast and other ways to show respect without causing offence. Also be sure to proof read your work to avoid little mistakes like missed capital letters. Well done x
You summarized the story well enough that I am able to read this and understand what this story is about. But I think it could be better if there was more analysis of the news story itself, such as where is comes from, and why it may have been covered. But you do give a well detailed opinion on the story, looking at both sides of the argument.
ReplyDeleteYou have given a detailed insight into the content of the story as well as raising some interesting rhetorical questions and arguing from both perspectives. In order to improve, you could go into more detail into how Asda as the institution has been represented in the article - perhaps analyse the quote and explain why you included it?
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