Your ideas are very profound and very interesting, you made use of good examples and shared your inspiration in the form of a trailer 'christine'. Your bowl is indeed full and I enjoyed reading it. :) I was also able to understand who each of the characters in your story are and the plot of your story.
You have written a very intriguing and detailed story plan, which gave me a good idea of your character and the story line, however I feel going forwards you could look at examples of film posters similar to the one you would make and suggest how they are effective. You could also suggest the conventions of a film poster and the conventions you would include. Overall you have started of well and seem to have a good idea of your storyline, which I am interested to see how you will develop next.
Good idea for the story plot, its something different that I haven't seen before! However has worried me a bit about my car lol You have clearly described about the plot and character which will help when progressing through your coursework. I like how you've done research about naming cars and what that means (is the woman going to have a name for her car???), also I like that you've identified and linked in a film which is similar to your idea. I couldn't see your poster ideas but I'm sure they are good!
I think you have been able to create a very good and detailed plan for your coursework. You came up with a good and interesting story line, and gave the descriptions needed for all the characters that you are going to use in order to produce your coursework. The plan will be a great help for you in order to produce a high mark coursework. Additionally, it is also very helpful that you included the film from, which you were able to generate your ideas from.
Your ideas are very profound and very interesting, you made use of good examples and shared your inspiration in the form of a trailer 'christine'. Your bowl is indeed full and I enjoyed reading it. :) I was also able to understand who each of the characters in your story are and the plot of your story.
ReplyDeleteYou have written a very intriguing and detailed story plan, which gave me a good idea of your character and the story line, however I feel going forwards you could look at examples of film posters similar to the one you would make and suggest how they are effective.
ReplyDeleteYou could also suggest the conventions of a film poster and the conventions you would include.
Overall you have started of well and seem to have a good idea of your storyline, which I am interested to see how you will develop next.
Good idea for the story plot, its something different that I haven't seen before! However has worried me a bit about my car lol
ReplyDeleteYou have clearly described about the plot and character which will help when progressing through your coursework. I like how you've done research about naming cars and what that means (is the woman going to have a name for her car???), also I like that you've identified and linked in a film which is similar to your idea. I couldn't see your poster ideas but I'm sure they are good!
I think you have been able to create a very good and detailed plan for your coursework. You came up with a good and interesting story line, and gave the descriptions needed for all the characters that you are going to use in order to produce your coursework. The plan will be a great help for you in order to produce a high mark coursework. Additionally, it is also very helpful that you included the film from, which you were able to generate your ideas from.
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